Open 'til the last man leaves and all have had their fill
The place that many called their home and many wish stood still
Erased this haven was, tore down so heartlessly
Left there just a piles bricks, but we've got our memories
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That's ok. Thumbs up👍. Sad that the place is gone though😢 sounded like a lovely place to hang out with friends👏👏
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