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The scene from my window
Is covered in white
The streets are aglow
Such a wonderful sight

Still sprinkles are floating
And falling to ground
So beautifully coating
The greens and the browns

All this is splendid
When seen through a window
But my love affair is ended
When outside I must go

Then in place of wonder
I now feel hate
At the slush that's under
And each new falling flake

It's beauty no more
It's now ugly and cold
As I'm frozen to the core
And my hatred takes hold

patdolan83

@patdolan83

BlackOps (Xbox) tag : PDolan8ball3 #Projecthumanity pdolan8ball3 (kik)

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Comments & Feedback (9)

That bad?

@sarahgamal it's not exactly a deluge but any snow is too much snow to me πŸ˜’.....thanks for the RP 😘

I love the snow inside or out! 😊😊😊 I'm liking this too πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Title's a corker mate πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ»

@sjw I'll forgive your enthusiasm for all things snow....but only because of the kind RP 😜😘

@leelee101 cheers mate 🍺

@chickgamer RP muchly appreciated 😘

@patdolan83 πŸ˜‚thank you 😘

Thank you @sammielee46 for the RP 😘

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