Sign In
Back

Find The Colours

(If you want to play, just look for the colours hidden within this poem. I would suggest not looking at the comments until you've found all ten colours)

If you agree never again
To dare do me wrong
I'll forgive all your sins
And our love can grow strong

Happiness or anger
It's all up to you
Reopening old wounds
I hope you never do

I hope you spur please
Hope within me
Give me many reasons
To believe we can be

You may have to clamber
And climb just to prove
You'll go to the lengths
That I've gone for you

I don't want to scream
And shout anymore
If that's where we head
Then with the wind I go forth

patdolan83

@patdolan83

BlackOps (Xbox) tag : PDolan8ball3 #Projecthumanity pdolan8ball3 (kik)

100
Stories

Similar Stories

taylergoatier
@taylergoatier

Question My Love

When your words are never good enough. That's when my love is real. When you feel as though things could get tough. Don't question my love. When you're on breaking ground. That's when my love is real.

90 words
MelchiorJ13
@MelchiorJ13

Fault Line

Stitching up a broken heart, A trade, a cult, a work of art, A skill, perfected, takes its time, To tack a thread through the fault line.

54 words
Stablish
@Stablish

Friends Forever

F orever in my heart. R emember the fun. I 'll never be apart. E nough sadness I'm done. N ow friendships begun. D ark days are passing. S ummer warmth comes. F ond memories lasting.

80 words
misslittleDHP
@misslittleDHP

Sacred Masterpiece

For each foretold mystery. The card of shame I hold. Tis now I realise peace and tranquility. Is blind to those who lies are told. You are the sweetness of peace. The ever bloom of a mystic flower.

105 words
melody
@melody

Hex

Came in Like a storm And made me fall. Head over heels. Called a name Like that of a doll, And can never seem To not know it all. You aren't good For me, Not bad either. What else but a hex.

103 words
Stablish
@Stablish

Music

M usic, a huge part of my life. U niversal language for all. S ounds that help, calm or ignite. I t's magic never fails to pull. C omfort from pain, always something to gain.

57 words
TaintedTulip
@TaintedTulip

My Glass Heart

This piece you hold. Glistening in the light. Is far from old. And shines very bright. It knows of pain. And happiness too. Only knew sadness. Until came along you. Full of scratches.

118 words
TaintedTulip
@TaintedTulip

It's All Fair

*Based off the saying,"All is fair in love and war.". In sickness. And in health. Through the poor. And the wealth. In pain. And in sorrow. Through the today's. And the tomorrow's. In past.

66 words

Comments & Feedback (40)

@glen colour quiz to mark the end

Excellent mate ๐Ÿ‘ฏ๐Ÿ‘ฏ๐Ÿ‘ฏ๐Ÿ’จ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ‘

I see green and red! I'll keep looking. This is brilliant! Fun!

Cream! How many are there?

Sand!

Orange, gold, purple!

@ckahn 7 colours...but that's without sand, I didn't even mean that one ๐Ÿ˜œ

@ckahn one more!

Green gold purple amber

Cream

Green red orange gold purple tan indigo! How many more? ๐Ÿ˜˜

Amber. I'm done

Very good Pat! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿป

Just read your comment lol 7 I've found them ๐Ÿ˜Š

Indigo

@sjw amber

@sjw ohhh! Where is indigo?

What a good idea ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

@sjw even I can't find tan lol....that one wasn't meant ๐Ÿ˜

@sjw found it!

This was great fun!

@ckahn haha I want more post like this ๐Ÿ˜‚

@leelee101 where's amber?

Ok even I got it wrong....there's 8 colours that I intentionally put in

@patdolan83 look at 'and shouT ANymore. ๐Ÿ˜˜

@sjw ohhhh yeah....the ironic thing is that I was thinking of putting tan in ๐Ÿ˜

I found amber @leelee101

@sjw yes! More posts like this!

So what are the eight you intended? @patdolan83

Green red orange gold purple. @patdolan8

Green red orange gold purple tan indigo amber cream sand that's all the ones I can find ๐Ÿ˜˜

Green red orange gold purple amber cream and indigo @sjw

I think my subconscious added tan and sand ๐Ÿ˜œ @sjw

How do you all find colors o.0

@insomnium They're hidden in the words of the poem! Some of them are mad up of the end of one word and the beginning of the next... happy searching! I just finished, it's quite fun and a good mental exercise. :)

Excellent! Well done! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

@burrahobbit ah I gotcha, gee thanks.. Never thought of it that way, really amazing writing @patdolan83 I found them all, it took me while but found them

@carolsgregory thank you...glad you liked it

@insomnium thanks for playing ๐Ÿ˜

Similar Writers