You'd be the snail and I'd be the rat
You'd feel my pain and I'd feel your nothing
I'd feel your indifference and you'd feel my suffering
It's only fair that this wish should come true
You should be me for an hour or two
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To walk in another's shoes... Just for a little while! What an amazing experience that would be. It would solve an awful lot of problems if we could do that. Great post, thought provoking. โจ๐โจ๐
@sleepydragon thank you again for the comment and RP ๐๐...this was written and aimed at my ex just after we broke up, but it does also lend itself to other situations I guess
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