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Her Rays

#Colourchallenge

Her ultra violet rays
Pierce my deep blue mood
With every word she says
She breaks her way through

The energy she fires
My defence can not withstand
She looks me in the eyes
I feel just like a man

Those ultra violet rays
Burn bright within her smile
Her hands transcend an heat
And her kiss would send me wild

patdolan83

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Comments & Feedback (6)

Awesome poem mate ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘

Brilliant! ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ˜˜โค

Nice one pat ๐Ÿ‘

Cheers guys...much appreciated ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Š @glen @LittleKitten @leelee101

I love this :) โค I perhaps see some reflection of my thoughts in it.

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