(R)anⓉeD - words used to break
(E)mⓄtivE - tones so coarse
(S)uⓇeFire - cracks in her restraint
(I)nⓉensE - it gets much worse
(G)ⓊArded - is her heart from joy
(N)eaⓇesT - to gone, all hope
(E)xtrⒺmE- the terror he employs
(D)reaⒹeD - each day, she's woke
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Maybe, but who cares? 👏👏👏 Really good mate. Although to make it even better, I think coarse instead of corse. Apart from that superb 🍻🍻🍻
@leelee101 I chopped and changed that a few times....was going for the word meaning rough, I think coarse is the word.....thanks for the RP mate 🍻🍻
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