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Deck Of Cards

There are 52 cards in a pack of playing cards
And 52 weeks in the year
There have been 52 lies that he told her
That makes 52 weeks full of tears

There are 4 suits in each pack
And 4 seasons in each year
There are 4 levels of his emotions
But with the anger brings her fear

There are many games to entertain
Using a deck of cards
But he has played with her mind
And each time it's been hard

SN AP you broke her heart

TW
I
T S the knife in deeper

BRAG about your success

patience......is making her weaker

You build the BRIDGEs but he knocks them down

A pONTOOn floating away

Her poker face hides her feelings

This is a game she no longer wants to play

eddie12309

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Comments & Feedback (21)

Amazing. Well done!!!!

Omg, brilliant, SO clever!!! πŸ‘πŸ˜Šβ€

@Davedave16 @Janflower thank you both. 😘😘

Love love love this....original and brilliant πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@Diddle thank you for the kind repost πŸ‘πŸ’š

@eddie12309 No prob! Really smart!

@misslittleDHP thank you lovely lady. Inline to think I'm always original. 😘😘for repost too. πŸ‘πŸ’š

* like to think

Amazing. Totally genius,,,

*!!!

πŸ’”Love it very much πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@KANS @sarahgamal thank you both and for the reposts. I like this one too. πŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ˜˜

Lovely use of words and playing around with numbers.

@mattreb10 thank you 😘

Wowowowowow! X x

@taylergoatier aww thank you. Glad you liked it. πŸ˜˜πŸ‘

I never realised that there were the same number of cards in a deck as the number of weeks in a year! Haha :D

@DanCreighton are you taking the piss? πŸ˜„

No.. I'm actually serious.. >.<

@DanCreighton well there's actually 54 if you count the jokers. πŸ˜‚

Jokers are awesome 😱

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