You slice and you dice,
Barely keeping me alive,
Your words cut to the skin,
One more and I won't survive.
I am flayed by your insults,
Heart on the verge of attack,
Brained exposed to the trauma,
Battered bones about to crack.
The rage erupts around you,
Words flowing in a stream,
And despite my crying pleas,
Your anger begins to steam.
Under the weight of your words,
I crumble down into dust,
Buried alive by your insults,
And left in a hole to rust.
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Soft voice, hard words. This is what I receive. Your sharpened tongue cuts through my soul, And waits for me to bleed. You cannot take the punches back, although they show no bruise.
They say the coldest place in the world is the Antarctic winter. -92 degrees where there is 6 months of darkness and 6 months of light. Dangerous place to go, can cause death if not beyond prepared.
You build me up, To knock me down, Tell me to smile, But make me frown. Tell me to laugh, But cut inside, Start with one tear, Then cause a tide.
There are 52 cards in a pack of playing cards. And 52 weeks in the year. There have been 52 lies that he told her. That makes 52 weeks full of tears. There are 4 suits in each pack.
'Just one more kiss' He said to me, But a kiss from him- was never free.
Where is the Eternity of love You promised In the rise and fall Of your selfish lungs So many years ago When we were both Different people.
You bring me so much pain, Just looking in your eyes, I can see that this is your game, You ignore my pathetic cries, You smirk as you watch me break, Laughing as I give in, You have so much more to...
Lonesome woman. Whispers into thin air. Wearing torn clothes. Matching torn hair. Nighttime screams. Slowly tears apart. What still remains. Of her dreary heart. Lacking happiness. There is just pain.
@ashhkat thanks! 😄 Been struggling to write anything for the past few days.. This is best I got right now, only one I could actually finish lol .. Only took until 5am. 👍
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