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Give Me Control

Come a little closer, I promise not to bite
Open up your world to me, gift to me your life
Make your soul available, for me to mould at will
Play the puppet on my strings, your life I'll fill with thrills
Let all you think you know, about me out your mind
Especially the viscous lies, and to you I will be kind
Taking you upon a trip, you never will forget
Emotions I will strip from you, a life without regret

patdolan83

@patdolan83

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Ooo nicely done sir πŸ‘πŸ‘β˜•

@leelee101 cheers mate and thanks for the RP πŸ‘πŸ‘β˜•

@Stablish a kind RP mate πŸ‘πŸ‘

πŸ˜±πŸ‘Ώ 666 πŸ‘

Nicely done for 666 and acrostic πŸ‘πŸ‘

@evilfingerz cheers mate...and thanks for the RP πŸ‘

@sarahgamal thank you 😊..and for the kind RP 😘

@sjw thanks for the kind RP 😘

Oooo πŸ‘πŸ‘

@sammielee46 thank you for the lovely RP 😘

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Loving this! πŸ‘πŸ”₯

@tetti2 thank you 😊

@RichWithey thank you my friend 😊...and thanks for the RP πŸ‘πŸΊ

@chickgamer 😊 thank you....and many thanks for the lovely RP 😘

@shaheenashapeenur many thanks for the kind RP 😊....ps this is the first time I've attempted to spell your name without looking back at it 😁..hope I got it right

@patdolan83 aha, you got it spot onπŸ˜„, and no problem, great writeπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

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