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Two Poems?

(Do these fit together?)

My world
I give to you in a second
My heart
Is yours for the taking
My life
Means nothing without you
My dreams
Are yours for the wakening

You'll never know
As no one could
The height of my passion
Or the depth of my love
The dream in my heart
Or the music I hear
When you cross my mind
And when you are near

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Comments & Feedback (13)

👍👍👍 they do mate

I feel that they flow slightly differently but both are standalone in my opinion :)

@leelee101 cheers mate

@tubbritt2012 thanks for the input mate, that's basically what I was thinking as well

@jackalice thanks for the RP mate

@sammielee46 thank you for the kind RP 😘

Agree with @tubbritt2012 they both have a different feel to me 😘

:)

They're both different, each one could be great alone but they're working well together 👏💗

@chickgamer thank you LJ 😘....and for the RP 😊😘

Hmmm I think 2 poems more

@sjw cheers 😘

@sarahgamal I think you may be right...thank you for the RP 😘

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