I'll Have My Twisted Fun

patdolan83 • 367 followers

I'm gonna take you over
Your body I'll control
You're the puppet I'm the master
And I'm damn good in this role

I'm gonna test your limits
Pull your strings until they snap
Twist your soul into a spiral
And bend your bones until they crack

I'm gonna make you bleed
Every drop of blood you hold
It's gonna seep but oh so slowly
And your eyes will start to roll

But just before the very end
Still some air left in your lungs
I'll leave you in a broken heap
The game is over...I've had my fun

#dark-poetry #general #manipulation #psychological-control #psychological-horror #violence

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Comments & Feedback (25)

sammielee46

Jan 25, 2013 at 5:49 PM

Ooh I love this 👍👍👏👏😘

patdolan83

Jan 25, 2013 at 5:51 PM

@sammielee46 😊 thanks for the RP Sam 😘

sammielee46

Jan 25, 2013 at 5:52 PM

My pleasure 😘

tetti2

Jan 25, 2013 at 5:52 PM

Oooo dark love it

patdolan83

Jan 25, 2013 at 5:55 PM

@tetti2 thank you for the comment and RP Terri 😘

sarahgamal

Jan 25, 2013 at 5:59 PM

😳😳😳 twisted that's right

sarahgamal

Jan 25, 2013 at 5:59 PM

But I like it 👏

seasonfury

Jan 25, 2013 at 5:59 PM

@patdolan83 rly gd! It reminds me if the phantom of the opera!

patdolan83

Jan 25, 2013 at 6:00 PM

@sarahgamal trust me when I say...it was going to be a lot more twisted, but I calmed it down 😜....thanks for the RP 😘

patdolan83

Jan 25, 2013 at 6:05 PM

@seasonfury thank you for the RP and the comment.....I was actually imagining a cartoon villain/monster singing it to his captive....almost like the Oogie Boogie man in Nightmare Before Christmas