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Kaleidoscope

Expectations, culture, family graft onto our eyes
A captivating child's toy, obscuring what's behind.

Stained glass shards just reassemble with a shift of view,
Wheeling like a mandala rolling through the pews.

Mythic hero, evil foil, strict but loving Dad;
Temper prone but all supportive Mother of the land.

Splintered echoes seen reflected over history;
We all share a lot as people, but what does it mean?

Is there some truth that underlies, or is it all pretense?
Are we simply overwhelmed without that fractured lens?

VikingHorn

@VikingHorn

Hi! I make beer, cook food, play bass, and occasionally write words

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BravoπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

I'm liking this lots well said πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Wow...this is a superb, thought evoking write...loved it...πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘βœ¨πŸ‘

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This really is an excellent write. I've read it a few times now and each time I see something different just like the kaleidoscope. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

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Brilliant and sensible write as always. Thank you for the tag, I appreciate it. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸ˜˜β€

@eddie12309 Thanks, Eddie, that's the best compliment possible! 😘

I agree with Eddie - lots to get out of this one πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@MrsS Thank you for the RP, I'm glad you found it and liked it!

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