#acrostic , alternate take.
Sealed! My lips will never speak
Of burning love's relentless heat.
Unfulfilled, reciprocated
Longing, ever in vain, fated.
Missing unacknowledged chances,
Always blocked by circumstances.
Take this secret to my deathbed,
Eternal yearning without respite.
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#acrostic challenge. [L]ove is Eliza & Jack,. [O]ur hearts in beautiful collision,. [V]iolently silent, lost in fusion,. [E]lementally combined. [A]lways and forever, I shall.
#acrostic challenge [A]mour. What is love anyway.
She is out there waiting just like me, Out there somewhere, feeling lonely. Unrequited feelings, emptiness inside, Longing to reignite a spark that's died.
Personal- if you don't actually know me this wont be too interesting. Just a very sleepy note to a friend.
If I were a painter, I'd paint you and me. On a wispy, pure, snow-white cloud, Away from reality. If I were a singer, I'd sing you a song. The fast beat never ending, Notes blending, soft and long.
Oh be happy me dear, Don't have a weakness- A fear. Be strong you're beautiful, You're no ordinary girl. Be yourself that's when you shine, But I don't think you know you're already mine.
If a song could make you love me. I would chose notes carefully. Place them strategically. A perfect melody. Resounding within your memory. Forever. If that could make you love me.
There's a fine line between a crush and a love, There's a barrier between below and above.
Wonderful work! Some acrostic pieces are clearly written to fit, whereas with this, it appeared to have happened almost accidentally. Really cleverππ
@Fly10 shoot, whybis that send button so close to the delete? I'm glad it didn't seem forced, though it was definitely plotted to work. Glad to see you back a little more, I hope all is going well now!π
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