[A]mour? What is love anyway? For
[M]e it is the day I saw her and knew
[O]nly she had my heart, only she
[U]ltimately could be the one for me,
[R]eality forced us apart, but that love never waned, it rainbow sky dived into a chasm so wide and so deep I have to keep reminding myself she is not mine and never will be, but the love? The love is so, so extraordinary I know she can feel it over Distance and Time, growing stronger, maturing, like a priceless French wine named 'C'est le temps de l'amour'
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Oh my. Heartbreaking but clever title, I thought earlier you may have gone down this road. πππππ
πππππthese are such lovely, tender writes. May I inquire as to the story behind them? I'm assuming its our own eliza, though we haven't heard from her in awhile. Forgive me if I'm nosy, and certainly don't share if it feels better to keep it private but these pieces speak of something so lovelyπππππ
Hey @ckahn , there's a write called belonging on my page which pretty much sums it up. We have a history, jack and I.
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