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Alarming Prince Charming

16+ disturbing and twisted you've been warned.

Once a maiden so fair
Sitting alone in her tower
Quite a beauty with raven hair
Perfect and beautiful like a flower

Waiting for her prince charming
She stayed in her room all alone
Shocked as nothing so alarming
To her could ever be known

Alas a prince did come
A tall strong prince charming
He just wanted a bit of fun
She should've seen it as alarming

He climbed over the walls
And broke into the tower
Gliding through he barely falls
As he comes this very late hour

She sat and gave a smile
Waiting for her true loves token
She'd been anxious for quite a while
Not knowing she would be broken

He charged in her room
All smiles and charm
She sensed her impending doom
And now the she felt the alarm

He doesn't say a thing
As he rips of her clothes
Just pain this monster brings
He whispers this is what you choose

He takes her with his sword
Without a single thought
Without another word
Just pain and torture he brought

In the dawn he ups and goes
Leaving the maiden fair
The pains she hides still shows
She's alone again no one cares

She wished for a happy ending
To be saved by prince charming
It's a bitch what fate was sending
Not good just something alarming.

aleishagayle20

@aleishagayle20

They call me Mistress and Priestess but I'm just me young crazy and free!

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Very dark. I approve.

@iWolf lol err thanks I guess I am meant to be one with the night lol hahaha 😄 thanks anyway

Ouch. Great write tho my mistress x

@leelee101 yeah well life's not a happy ending lol might as well show that glad you like tho lee king 😘

Excellent. For some reason I got gothic tones from it, not sure if intended, but brilliant

@puffy1980 probz did I am quite gothic anyway glad you enjoyed thanks for the repost 😘

More then welcome! :)

Great dark write from the Dark Lady.

Im sure the fair maiden will one day find her prince charming 😽

@sjw lol yeah okay haha

@aleishagayle20 I'll say "told you so" when he does lol 😽

Deliciously dark! Loved every word :D

@sjw lol haha okay @Dovahkiin thanks I'm glad you liked it 😘

Can't believe I missed this one my lovely...it's FABULOUSLY DARK :):)

@misslittleDHP I'm glad you like babe 😊

@misslittleDHP thanks for the repost. Babe 😘

@aleishagayle20 Nice one hun😘👍

@DuRoLuRo glad you like 😘

Aww I felt sorry for her :(

@musicalmissy you should she was left broken thanks for the comments

@aleishagayle20 anyway well done very nice piece

@musicalmissy thanks babe

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