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This is what i have so far for my love(: if u have any ideas on how to make it better...i will put it into consideration but idk what i'll do. Thank you so much!

I think I'm falling too quickly,
But I'm loving it so much.
You send a rush through me,
When my face feels your fingers touch.

You put me to sleep,
With the sound of your singing.
Your relaxing voice,
Knocks me to my knees.

We talk until morning,
For hours and hours.
You keep me up all night:),
Yes me, you overpower.

You're the one i dream of,
When I fall asleeep at night.
The one I'm not giving up,
Without putting up a fight.

You say it's your job,
To make me laugh.
Well I guess it's a job well done,
From all the fun we have.

annie_phelps

@annie_phelps

Hey i'm 16. I love to write poems on Depression, love, and my innermost thoughts and feelings! Follow me!

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Comments & Feedback (3)

This is so sweet! And so well written!

Thank you so much! It means alott!(:

Check out my other poem, called Tanner Jaden Keller. It was my first poem deficated to him(: