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Lottie's Candle

My little sister Lottie,
I'm going through her things.
Packed in boxes in the attic,
But still the memory stings.

She was so small and innocent,
for her I light this flame
I find her favorite book,
For her death I was to blame

I remember holding her small hand tight,
Cradling it with care
But when it was too late for her,
It was just too much to bear.

I cried and I wept in the hospital,
so very very sad,
I didn't smile for ages then,
I thought I was going mad.

So on her birthday I light this candle
And read her favorite book
I get the match to strike a light,
My hand, oh, how it shook.

I light this candle for my Lottie,
For her little ghost
At the end I blow out her candle,
A goodbye to who I love the most.

awesomeannie

@awesomeannie

Kitten with whiskas.

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Comments & Feedback (34)

@Georgiastar, hope you enjoy and don't cry!😉

Aww, this is so sad yet very well written! Well done! 💙😜💙

@Georgiastar thank you. If you like it, I also made a non poem version, but haven't entered it in the writers challenge.😒

Ok

Glad to see you taking part! 😘 A great write by the way! 😃

@mpallister24 thank you

@awesomeannie sad😓but ❤good!

And I am lottie!!!

Ahhh! I killed @Lottiepenguin!

@awesomeannie oh no!! She entered the competition as well...! And I think we were gonna do something tomorrow! Aww, this is terrible!........LOL! ❤😜❤☺❤!

I'm

I'm

I'm a murder at age 11! What have I done wrong?!

I'm a murderer at age 11! @Georgiastar , what should I do?!

Oh n

...oh no! This isn't good! Hide!

@Georgiastar ::ducks under bed:: I think I'll just stay here until I turn 17

Ok! Hmm...don't you think people will realise that your missing fo

...for a while?

@Georgiastar yes, but I'll leave a note saying that I've been eaten by were-hamsters

Ok!before you hide make sure you have lots of food and water,

@Georgiastar yup, stocking up on Oreos now

Haha, lol @awesomeannie!

Haves got a charger for ur iPod/iPad/iPhone so u can still go on opuss @awesomeannie?! Lol! 😉

@Georgiastar yes and....... Yup, there's a socket under the bed

Wow, 23 comments on one peice, that's a record for me

LOL! now it's 25!!

I just broke my own record. Wow, now it's 26!

OMG! @Georgiastar , @LottiePenguin came back to life and won the challenge! By the way, thanks for choosing me second 😉😘

Your welcome and IKR!

@Georgiastar it's a miracle. I mean, in my head, she had a funeral and everything, she was hit by a CAR! 😱 well, this just means u can eat all these Oreos now! Nom Nom Nom! 🍘

LOL

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