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As the two gangs begun fighting, Nash ended up fighting Gordon, and pushed him on the floor! As Gordon fell, he was immediately kicked numerous times by different gang members! As he struggled to block the kicks, in rushed Harry, Zack and Shaun, and begun punching Nash and the others!

As Rob and Johnny continued fighting, Johnny picked up his bat, and swung it towards Rob, who ducked! As he ducked though, Johnny brought the bat round and whacked Rob in the face!
As Rob recoiled in pain, he was hit again, and again, and again! He fell on the floor, and kept being hit! He was bleeding bad now! But suddenly, in jumped Shaun, and rugby tackled Johnny to the floor! Suddenly, Andy pulled out a gun, and fired! The bullet struck Shaun as he was punching Johnny!

Shaun felt the bullet and collapsed onto the floor! Marina and Veronica were walking past when they heard it! They sprinted round the corner, and found havoc!!!

Blood was everywhere!
Kezza heard it too and rushed round the corner! Andy turned round, smirked at Rob, and pointed the gun at Kezza!

"No!" Rob rugby tackled Andy to the floor! The trigger was pulled! Kezza ducked as it skimmed her elbow! Rob started punching Andy, who reached for his gun, Rob punched him again, and again! Suddenly the police arrived, arrested Andy, Johnny and Rob! Everyone looked shellshocked as Rob was dragged away in handcuffs! Nash picked up the gun, and shot Rob as he was being led away! Rob dropped to the floor, the Police officers spun round and were both shot! As more police arrived and tackled him to the floor! He was led away, with Johnny and Andy, to prison! But Rob, and Shaun, were both taken to hospital!

As Johnny was being taken away ..
"Gordon, no hard feelings about Veronica no?"
Gordon looked at him, shocked! Veronica went pale as it struck what was happening!
"Oh, and it's my baby!" he laughed as he was taken away.
"I'll get you for this Johnny! If it's the last thing I do! And you, you ... You filthy cow! Get away from me!" Gordon was angry
"But Gordon ... I love you, it's why I did it!" Veroncia was pleading
"What happened to no more secrets eh?! No, one rule for you, another for me ... I hate you!" And with that, Gordon left.

One week later ...
"Rob was a brilliant friend, and he would've done anything for us! He loved Kezza so much!" Harry read the notes during the funeral, a teardrop was the loudest thing heard that day!

As Shaun was in hospital, he looked up at Marina ...
"I ... I lo... I love you" he managed to say it.
But as he did, his heart stopped beating!

TO BE CONTINUED!
In series 2, coming soon!

ben_leggatt

@ben_leggatt

18years old, hope to have a career in the media industry at some point in the near future :) Oh and I'm welsh :) and every story I make I will hopefully manage to make into a film or TV Series at some point in the future. Director and co-founder of CleverBoxMedia.com ! Anybody who would be willing to help me make my stories into either a book, film or Tv series just let me know. INSTAGRAM-Ben_Leggatt Black belt and coach in karate for Seki Ryu Zan!!! Also, anyone who's just starting and needs advice and help, just let me know :) Oh and if you show me respect I will show respect back to you. Many Thanks,

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Everyone's dead!

@lonelynutmeg98 no! Only Rob is dead! Johnny, Nash, Andy r all in prison and Shaun could die ... U will have to read series 2 to find out

@ben_leggatt when's it out?

@lonelynutmeg98 during summer time :) with big shocks, in the actual story, and in the production/writing of it :) ;) :) its all I'm saying

I gotta say, nice improvements. I liked it. Got a little confused in the fighting scenes, lots of people lol. Other than ta

Other than that, it was pretty good.

@WildOneKezza thanks :) sorry for all the arguing and everything, I just wasn't in the best mood and got really annoyed because of it ... Sorry :L

@ben_leggatt ikr.... 'we got a stress head over here!' JOKE JOKE JOKE. iJust cant help myself sometimes.....

@WildOneKezza I kinda noticed ;) joke :) but seriously, I shouldn't have reacted like that, but it did make me feel better :) lol

@ben_leggatt it bloody made me feel better. I know i'm pretty arrogant sometimes, but hey.... I wasn't dissing wales.... I actually am just that shit at geography.....

@WildOneKezza hehe, I actually didn't think it was possible being that rubbish at geography :O :L

@ben_leggatt umm... Oops. It really is.... Please see my story? Juz sayin...

@ben_leggatt cant believe rob is dead! Whats fu

Whats gunna happen to kezza? Can u do me a favour and when u create the new series add my new second character bree taylor? She is not easily fooled, small but cute and has quite a gob. She is pretty popular though. And btw in series 2 yu need more girls...: there was like 8 guys and only like 3 girls lol maybe less guys more girls? To even it out, it would probably be easier for you and the reader!

@WildOneKezza sure :) I've got a massive surprise for everyone ahead of the 2nd series though, so don't think it's gonna b the same ... It's gonna b very different :) ;)

@ben_leggatt good to see you to friends again ha ha very good mate.

@glensaggs thnx m8

Omg !

@Dj_Mac u like?

Duh I like ? How couldn't I ?

@Dj_Mac oh good :) hehe

I miss it 😭

It's @Dj_Mac here on my bros account I just want to say I'm really sorry I haven't started posting new ones of this like u asked me 2 but my I phone got taken away but I have written down ideas on paper I will get it back soon if u want to get someone else to do it I understand but yeh sorry@ben_leggatt

@callz it's fine :) email me ben.leggatt@live.co.uk with ur ideas and stuff and I can help a bit :) the thing with me writing something like this is I find myself getting bored way too quickly, or thinking of another story, and then rushing to end it :/ If it's possible I'd like to still write one or two, with ur help, but if u have a good idea for the series I understand :)

@ben_leggatt of course you can write some !!!! Thank you so much :) I'm definitely getting my iPhone bk after Xmas but I'm only aloud on my bros for like a minute ;) I'll email u as soon as possible I just need to re read the series so my ideas make sense thanks :)

@callz alright :)

@ben_leggatt Give Tryfan to someone else please I'm not getting my iPhone bk for ages so yeh :) let me now if I get my iPhone bk and another oppurtunity comes up but give this to some1 else :) (Danielle)

@callz u sure? I'll probably end up writing it myself x

@ben_leggatt yh lol I'm barely on my brothers anymore as well cuz I'm banned from all Internet cuz Iade a fb and I wasn't allowed :(

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