Molly's POV
In the gang there's me, Luke, Jack, Isaac and Emma. Zara used to be in it until she died or was she murdered. We was walking throw the corridors, to maths and we found Zara dead!!!
Zara's POV 2 hours before
I was walking to my locker, and I realised I had forgotten my lunch, then I saw my aunty approaching me with a paper bag in one hand and a dagger in the other. The bell rang for first class. I'm in 3rd class. In our school, our teachers aren't as organised, so they have 5 classes. The 5th bell went and the next thing I knew I was stabbed and I'm a ghost.
Emma's POV
I was so surprised to find Zara dead! I contacted her aunty but she wouldn't pick up. I was so worried. Jack held my hand. I go out with Jack, but I'm thinking of dumping him, because I heard Hannah thought she found the right guy and he dumped her. Jack whispered in my ear "Everything is going to be alright and took me to his walk in locker. He asked school if he could knock the wall down to make it bigger. "Are you alright, you've been sad a lot recently," I've been sad because I'm being bullied by George. He's the school bad boy. Plus I've found out that Zara is dead. "I will do any thing to make you smile," he continued.
"I have to say something," I murmured. "This is not easy to say but I want to dump you, your a great guy but I think I'm not ready," I lied about I'm not ready, I didn't want him to know the real truth.
Jacks POV
I like Emma but if shes not ready, it wasn't meant to be. I walked out and found Luke and Isaac waiting for me.
"What did she say," asked Luke.
"Dumped," I said, miserably, and ditched school. I climbed over the Gate and ran home. I played L.M.F.A.O songs. I remember me and Emma listening to L.M.F.A.O an it made me cry a little. I just needed to forget about Emma.
Luke's POV
I found blood dripping out of Zara's heart and she looked like she had been stabbed. SHE HAD BEEN MURDERED!!!!!!!!!! I needed to tell every one but they were at lessons. I wrote it down in my dark blue notebook, I kept in my pocket to not things down, and I took a picture of Zara's wound. I waited in the corridor for the gang. Molly came first. "Look, Zara has been stabbed," I said. Molly was on shock and replied "It's true, it's true!" and cried to the girls toilets
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Right ok, great story but rewrite it because the gang should start with all of them even Zara so she can be in the gang at first but then she gets murdered in like chapter 2, in chapter one you explain the gang fully and what king of gang they are what surroundings they are in family,friends and other things like boyfriends
Chapter
Excludes action this is when everything turns to shock that is when I think Zara should be murdered that will take a lot of describing thet takes u on to chapter 3
That's will be when they find out and the sadness they are going through
Chapter 4
Maybe started to phone police trying to get in touch with her antie then they see Zara as a ghost
Chapter 5
THE CASE IS ON after this you try and find no find the murdered in these next chapters
Well yes u won't have thought it when u were 7 but if you were writing a proper book you should do this
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