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Ok, so this is my attempt at a scene setter for a gothic story, hope you like it! If you do please tell me and I might write a full gothic story!

My footsteps softly rustled on the damp, moulding leaves, but to me, it was the sound of death; death so cold it pierced the very centre of my hard, grey, stony heart. The coldest wind in all the nights I have lived in death, blew upon my pale lifeless face. The silver moonlight, emerging from the darkest cloud, seemed to suck the very life out of this earth that I have wandered upon, lonely for all time. And I, Vincent van goth, slipped, into the tempest of souls...

Hope you like!

P.S. I couldn't resist chucking a bit of humor in there at the end, that's just me!

bop365

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It's awesome and very descriptive :)

@Fibr thanks!

@bop365 thats good especially your Vincent van goth ;) loving it

Thanks @sojo (and @Fibr) do you think I should do a full gothic story?

@bop365 yh, I'm trying myself to write a horror scary/goth story ATM; and it's hard!! But you seem to know where your going with yours. Give It a try I think it will be great :)

Yeah definitely! :D

@sojo @Fibr thanks! That might come up shortly!

@bop365 very impressive! I myself love writing horror/goth stories, but none of mine can compare to yours!

@ilypadfoot thanks! But I'm sure yours are just as good, if not better, than mine!

@bop365 thanks (: I'll post some of my stories later (;

@ilypadfoot great! Please tag me in, I would love to see them!

@bop365 of course (:

Yay! 😃

@octopuss please read this, I would love some feedback!

Bop!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Man you've a amazing potential!!! Can you turn it to gothic poem? Maybe with white rhymes.

Style, images, sense and humor.....mmmmmmmmm...delicious!!!!!!

@octopuss wow! Thanks! Really? I will! Thanks!

@octopuss btw, what are white rhymes?!?!

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