Sign In
Back

an internal revaluation

take a dose of my mind, your thoughts become altered.
the days i excel, the seconds i've faltered.
the hopes and the dreams, left alone at the alter.
my words are my ropes, used to tie up the halter.
from which, i'll hang, the me i despised.
who covered up his emotions, left smothered in lies.
don't get me wrong, my life's better than ever.
the new me is honest, to himself and whoever.
whoever i meet, what ever the day.
the old me was poison, emotions decayed.
this smile is staying, this mindset is golden.
these feet, standing strong on the path i have chosen.

braydenbosch

@braydenbosch

twenty one. finally learning who i am and what i love.

27
Stories

Similar Stories

Hells
@Hells

Forgiveness

To forgive is one of the hardest things to do - mostly because the ones we generally have to forgive are the ones that hurt us the most, those people we really keep close and cherish.

126 words
PoppyA
@PoppyA

Jealousy

The sea of jealous greens and blue, For anyone who isn't you. You hide behind a plastered smile, But come sit down and talk a while.

111 words
Dimi
@Dimi

That Text About How To Be Happy Or Feel A Bit Better.. My Titles Are Long Sometimes!!

Whenever I feel bad or sad. I always remember the good things I have and I have gone through. It makes me feel better and it makes the pain go away. I try to put that pain away. That sorrow.

111 words
megz92
@megz92

Sabotage

I'm not going to sabotage this. I've changed my ways, theres no reason for it. So Instead of leaving il give you a kiss. I've been hurt and did not heal.

104 words
LiveLoveLife
@LiveLoveLife

Mask

We like to pretend that high heels donโ€™t hurt our feet, and that we always look as good as we do when weโ€™re wearing make-up and our prettiest clothes.

217 words
kristylee1
@kristylee1

The First Poem In 17 Years So Be Kind

I don't feel anything nothing at all. I've been this way once before. The cycle keeps repeating the lesson not learnt. How many times do I need to be burnt. I keep on forgetting about the true me.

169 words
rjf1026
@rjf1026

Joyous Relief

Here I am just 21 years young, Still healthy and high strung. I'm smiling from ear to ear, A weight held lifted earlier this year.

154 words
Latrodectus
@Latrodectus

Broken Pieces

#Phrase Sometimes we sit Sorting through The shattered pieces With the hope Of finding something Just something...

75 words

Comments & Feedback (4)

I'll hang the me I despised- great line! Really like this ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ’—

@sjw thank you so much๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘

I can relate. Brilliant piece ๐Ÿ˜„

@pthasse that means a lot, thank you๐Ÿ˜Š

Similar Writers