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Unacceptable

As you may have noticed, as you may of found,
When my feet hit the pavement, they make a different sound.
Whilst yours go clip and clop, mine seem to slip and slop.
I drag my feet apparently, and this is unacceptable. As a lady doing this i found it quite respectable.
To be the only one it the street, to have a different sound from my feet.

And upon my face a smile would form, whilst all the other ladies scorn.
I slip and slop away from them, whilst they hide their grief from their friends,

They wished they had the power too, to do exactly what they want to do.
As their jealous eyes are up in flames, For I am a girl who wouldn't be tamed.

charlottearmstrong

@charlottearmstrong

Heya, 13. British. Suffolk. Love art <3. I don't mind a bit of poetry so y'know. I never shut up so chat sometime? (kik me=lottiearmstrong1) Follow mayb??

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I like it , I do somethin with the ending add a lol somethin

Lil*

Yeah I finished it quite badly! Any ideas for a better ending?

I'd counter that, it think it ends very nicely and finishes the whole poem brilliantly. 👏👏👏😘

That's just my opinion though 😊

Aww that's really sweet aha ❤

Thanks ❤

@charlottearmstrong no problem, great poem😘

@charlottearmstrong Great poem 👏😘

Thanks :)

Thanks ❤