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Crimson Tide

ckahn
ckahn • 353 followers

Fury bites
Shakes the night
Tender charms recede

Twisted metal
Thorns and nettle
Make this brother bleed

Tied to the rack
Watch your back
when crimson tide
comes around
Shot gun shells
Gates of hell
This sisters got a frown

Monsoon doom
Discordant tune
The banshee has her say

Storms in tea cups
Keep your knees up
Keep the storm at bay

This is whack
Watch your back
when crimson tide
comes around
Mercury rise
A brother tries,
but only time will bring it down

#dark-poetry #general #sibling-conflict #violence
ckahn

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A girl.

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Comments & Feedback (15)

sjw
sjw
Jul 10, 2012 at 11:52 AM

Kristina I wish this had a multiple like button I love it!!!!! ❤🌹

misslittleDHP
misslittleDHP
Jul 10, 2012 at 12:08 PM

This is fabulous my darling...love it muchly😍😍😍😍😍

glen
glen
Jul 10, 2012 at 12:11 PM

An excellent write 😄😃🍳

ckahn
ckahn
Jul 10, 2012 at 2:10 PM

@sjw ha ha! Thank you☺just a bit if female lore😘💐💐

ckahn
ckahn
Jul 10, 2012 at 2:10 PM

@misslittleDHP thanks friend. Glad you liked it💗💗 thanks for the RP😘

ckahn
ckahn
Jul 10, 2012 at 2:12 PM

@glen ha ha! Fried egg! You're too funny😜 I'm glad you liked it. There's several of mine you've missed. Check um out. Did you see words 3? Thanks for the RP friend😘💗💗😘

ckahn
ckahn
Jul 10, 2012 at 2:13 PM

@sjw thanks for the RP my dear😘💗😘

Fly10
Fly10
Jul 10, 2012 at 8:14 PM

Superb piece👏😘

ckahn
ckahn
Jul 11, 2012 at 1:40 AM

@Fly10 thanks my dear. Hope you're doing ok😘💗

wolfie
wolfie
Jul 11, 2012 at 7:49 AM

Love this

ckahn
ckahn
Jul 12, 2012 at 12:58 AM

@wolfie thank you☺

wolfie
wolfie
Jul 12, 2012 at 1:20 AM

@ckahn you write such compelling pieces Kristina.

ckahn
ckahn
Jul 12, 2012 at 2:26 AM

@wolfie thank you! Truly this one and Meet me There, I did while trying to @

ckahn
ckahn
Jul 12, 2012 at 2:26 AM

@wolfie gal

ckahn
ckahn
Jul 12, 2012 at 2:29 AM

@wolfie gak! While trying to emulate your style more. It's more of a struggle but worth it I think. Thank you for reading and your kind words! That also makes it worth it😘💐

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