Eternal

ckahn • 353 followers

I've loved you since my seed was planted.
Your smell.... so sweet.
Like forests and rain.
Your eyes....clear, bright.
I fell in so long ago.
Ancient trees, reaching to the skies.
Valleys come and gone.
Yet here I reside,
in the comfort of your depths.
Winds forever sighing upon the sands.
Do you hear it my love?Gentle whispers and moans.....eternal, my sweet, my love songs remain.

#acorn #general #metaphorical-love #nature-poetry #perspective-shift

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