I believe that love
Has a very strange
But great
Sense of humour.
It makes you think
It makes you believe
There is no hope
As tight as a rope.
I know the humour
That love brings
I've had the feeling
It's a dream.
Love plays tricks
Love brings treats
It gives us strength
Yet sometimes beats.
But the one thing
I know about love
Is how to lose
And how to win.
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Some people say love is bad and you should be careful with it and once your heart is broken, you'll never be the same. I think love is good. Here's a poem that includes both points of view.
WhyDoWeDoIt. DoWeDoIt. WeDoIt. DoIt. WeDoItWhenWeSeeFit ... Why do we fall in love. Or get the flutters in our stomachs, like the wings of a dove. Why is it so easy to fall.
Burgundy, this heart of mine, A little withered, but that's fine, It still beats at its normal pace, Although it doesn't take first place.
H eavenly bliss replaces the woe. A sweet scent flows with grace. R oam about free to come and go. M omentous , a glorious place. O ut of sight are fears that plagued.
Sitting here alone I feel my mood begin to slip, My cheery disposition has decided now to flip, The joy of living happily has suddenly took flight, I know this filthy mood is gonna stay with me all...
That's all I can hear, just silence. I wish I wanted to sleep. But I don't so I might as well enjoy the silence... Well, silence is quiet, I'll give it that. And this is a good opportunity to write...
Love is exciting. Love is thrilling. Love is exhilarating. Love is two people in the here and now. Love can be dangerous. Love can be frightening. Love can be tears.
A sea of faces,. In an empty room,. A paradox,. Seems to loom,. A whisper's sigh,. In a still, still night,. A larking's call,. As it becomes light,. The seasons change,. Yet stay the same,.
Hmmm. That's a very interesting last line. Surely we've all lost at love and been blessed with live but I can't say that I've learned how to actually make either of those things happen. Love the flow of this piece thoughππ
Simple brilliance. Interesting concept of winning or losing in love. πβ¨πβ¨π you should write more about that.
@naaviie it's a German Shepherd cross collie I have another one that's crossed with a husky they are both gorgeous boys :) x
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