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Death Valley

What has happened to the world into which I was born?
Beauty ravaged, and war torn

Disease and destruction, lay at my feet
The world has crashed in a veil of deceit

You put your faith in good and evil came knocking
He let his guard down, now Satan is mocking

Pandemonium and anguish all at mans hands
A fallen angel made you a puppet at his demands

The smell of burning from the flames of Hell
Humanity descending, I hear them yell

My hearts filled with sorrow, I have nowhere to go
I sit and wait, while my tears flow

What use are my prayers, when no one can hear
Will balance be restored, take away my fear?

I close my eyes, and hold my breath
Evil has found me in the valley of death

Opening line reworded from Psalm 23:4

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Awesome. πŸ‘Morning β˜•πŸ‘β€

@leelee101 thank you. Thought I had posted it last night must have timed out. Morning and thanks for repost glad you liked it β˜•πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

Excellent πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@Burrfoot thank you and for kind repost. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

Wow, brilliant poem. I love it πŸ’™

@Jamtots thank you and your kind comment and repost. πŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ˜˜

Great opening line love this hun πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@sjw I would say thanks, but it's just reworded from the bible. Glad you enjoyed it though πŸ‘πŸ’š

It's also from a track called gangsta paradise by coolio πŸ‘β€

@sjw so it is. Love that. Now I've got it in my head going to have to listen to it now. πŸ‘πŸ‘

@eddie12309 haha it is a cool track πŸ’ƒπŸ’ƒ

Brilliant piece, I enjoyed that πŸ˜ƒπŸ‘

Nicely re wordedπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

@Weirdwolf @Stablish thank you both and for kind reposts. πŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ˜Š

This is good.. Made my day

@JonNarayan thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. πŸ‘πŸ˜Š

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