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Can you feel her
Can you see her dreams
She is wrapped up in a torrent of emotion
Her world ripping at the seems

Can you hear her
Can you read her mind
She is drowning in a waterfall of wasted tears
Fates hand has been too unkind

Can you see her
Can you feel her pain
She is the woman looking back at you in the mirror
And you don't even know her name.

eddie12309

@eddie12309

Busy mummy who loves to read to my children. Will write about anything

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Comments & Feedback (8)

Ooo pretty painful hun. 😒 Not true I hope. β˜• Good morning

@leelee101 no entirely fictional. Morning β˜•πŸ‘

@eddie12309 πŸ‘πŸ‘β˜•

πŸ’” But really well said. Glad it's fictional

I was worried then! Glad it's fictional!

Same πŸ‘†glad it's not you πŸ˜ŠπŸ’

@sarahgamal @Irrational_Kimmi aw bless. Thanks for reading. I've a fair few years under my belt so have encountered many people and many emotions. Glad you liked. πŸ’šπŸ˜˜

Ouch. Well expressed πŸ’š

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