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Frenemies

Take with you every quip, a joke at my expense,
May it add to your good fortune.
A petite nose is tipped,
With an artist's hand, blond hair is flicked
And white teeth shine behind your smile.
Like Confucius food I crumble,
And my less sharp tongue has tripped.
The words tumble
And you are already laughing at my redness.
With sweaty palmed embarrassment,
I wish you dead because
Gases swell when the old man comes to call.
Purple tipped fingers stubborn,
Twisted in a slow, longer than life spasm.
No longer painting your pictures
And learned tongue silenced.
Your pot has boiled
And your shroud has no pockets.

I wrote this about a friend turned enemy at school. Hope you can relate/appreciate/enjoy....

eliza

@eliza

Free spirited but grounded, living in the UK, I write for myself, but enjoy sharing with like minded people. I hope you enjoy. All my work is original unless otherwise stated.

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Brilliant! Loved it :)

@Dovahkiin Thanks Paul, I'm glad that you liked it. :)

@eliza first name terms eh :P lol you're welcome Eliza..I've had a fair few frenemies in the past!

@eliza haven't we all! Not that I'm bitter ;) just glad I'm able to effectively verbalise the unique sense of rage that frenemies seem to evoke. There's really nothing quite like it is there? What a let down. Hey ho. Karma's a bitch ;)

@eliza I know where you're coming from...if you're supposed to keep friends close and enemies closer, where do you keep frenemies!!

@Dovahkiin in a box under ground?

@eliza haha :) yeah or under surveillance :P

It's a tough world for girls out there...

@beruangkecil : yup. Why do we make life so hard for each other!?!

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