My mind is a mess of my thoughts inside
Every-time, wishing it was me that died
Lost in seas of blackest tar
All alone, at least thus far
Never did she ever think, future
Changed just from that drink
Holding onto her last dress
Only go to her graves rest
Losing her, a downward spiral
Years I cry, without a smile
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@evilfingerz Thanks for re commenting my name! I was trying to read yours before school but the bus arrived and I must have forgotten! SOOOO sorry. As for the poem, it was great ad definitely worth the wait. Truly a great piece 👏👌👍😘
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