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My Suns Still Shining

Not exactly happy,not exactly sad
Almost ecstatic,almost glad
Time goes so quickly when your having fun
But it goes so slowly once you lose some of your sun
My suns on the horizon just not quite rising
Looking to the future but not quite realising
My suns still with me and won't let darkness fall
I'll get to my sun even if it is a long crawl
Everything I need has always been there
Looking at my sun just waiting for its bright glare

gazplend

@gazplend

30 something,Staffordshire, England, never judge a cover by its book.

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Comments & Feedback (11)

Your writings getting very metaphorical! Really like this babe πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜X

@sjw aw thankyou babe,I'm actually thinking of living my life as a metaphor now,so much easier! β€πŸ˜˜πŸ’X

Lmao! Your so sarcastic... πŸ˜ͺX

Some real deep stuff gaz xx me hopes your sun rises soon x

@sjw haha! You know me sienna! πŸ˜„πŸ˜˜β€X

@minxyMolly thankyou Lsm x I know it will don't worry πŸ˜˜πŸ’š

I can feel a bit of George Micheal coming on 🎀 terrioke rocks!

@tetti2 nooooo!!!! 😱😱😱

@gazplend hahaha it's all in the performance

This warmed me up, and it was cold today! A great read πŸ˜ŠπŸ’œπŸ‘

@Hazera aw thankyou! Lovely comment πŸ˜˜πŸ’

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