It took my breath away by how cold it was, all my body was numb, frozen. I kept on swimming, waves breaking over the top of me, trapping me under water. I was finally free, I had finally been saved. I was going someplace better. Some where called home. I sank slowly into the unknown. Water filled my lungs, no oxygen could enter. The icy fluid slowly filling my body. Unaware of my surroundings I had finally slipped away.
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