Shining Star

honestlyemily • 19 followers

You were the brightest star
Gleaming in the sky
I watched you from afar
And wished that you were mine
When your world ended
You thought no one would care
If you just stopped shimmering
But you didn't see me there

You were a shooting star
Falling from the sky
I could see it happening
Right before my eyes
I wanted to catch you
I wanted to try
But I could not reach that high
And you couldn't see me there

When will you shine again?
I miss your light, I miss my friend
All we have is who we are
And you are a shining star

Where are you fallen star?
Why'd you fade away?
Without you in the sky
Nothing looks the same
If only somehow
I could help you find your way
But you don't even know my name
I wish you would see me here

When will you shine again?
I miss your light, I miss my friend
All we have is who we are
And you are a shining star

Shine again, shine anew
Shine on...shine through
Shine for me, shine for you
For you are a shining star

When will you shine again?
I miss your light, I miss my friend
All we have is who we are
And you are a shining star

#cosmic-symbolism #emotional-loss #general #longing #metaphorical #unrequited-love

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Comments & Feedback (9)

Feb 26, 2012 at 2:27 AM

♥ this one...

Feb 26, 2012 at 2:46 AM

Thank you. I wrote this about a friend from jr. high. I recently foind out he's battling colon cancer, so I dug out the lyrics to post in his honor. <3

Feb 26, 2012 at 2:48 AM

Darned typos.

Feb 26, 2012 at 3:06 AM

That's soooooo sweet!!!

Feb 26, 2012 at 3:33 AM

Wow that's really sweet and really beautiful.

Feb 26, 2012 at 4:28 PM

😄I love your poem still I read it again and now I'm commenting again!!!!

Feb 26, 2012 at 4:28 PM

Lol!!!!!!!!

Feb 26, 2012 at 4:32 PM

Comment away. :o)

Feb 26, 2012 at 10:25 PM

Yay!!!

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