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Chapter 1. Drama & Urbex

The stones crumbled under my feet, I was ready to jump, ready to fall, I bent my knees, ready to end it all, then..
"Cut!" Mr Lawless shouted, my director.
"Lynn, darling! What's wrong with you? This is the SCENE! More emotion, more momentum! Come on." He held out his hand from the little ledge I was stood on set. "Down you get. Now, next time, that's Tuesday! We will work on that! Now run along, I'll phone your mother and let her know you done great! See you next week honey!" Mr Lawless works in a talent company, this is what I'm here for, I didn't really enjoy drama but I was good at it, and my mother shoved me into this anyway.
I grabbed my bag and jacket and headed for the door. My best friend, hannah, and my two other best friends, Rhys and Andrew were picking me up in Andrews white car, the "titanic" we called it.
"S'up flaps!" Andrew exclaimed. A short, well build man with dark brown spiky hair. Flaps was a personal joke. I used to be labelled 'flapjacks' due to my lack of breasts, but andrew and rhys decided it was too long, and I'm now flaps. "Why the long face, angel? Wasn't that bad was it?" He spoke in a soft tone.
I just kinda mumbled and walked towards Rhys, he put his arm around me. "Are you okay?" He whispered. I nodded and flashed a smile at my beautiful best friend hannah, she had shoulder length dark blue wavy hair and an astonishing smile. Another feature that was the opposite from mine would be her large mass of breasts, which gave her the name Baps. That's right, flaps and baps. My partner in crime, my best friend for eight years, impeccable relationship you would find between us two.
And for Rhys, he was 21, I was 15. Already you could tell the relationship difficulty. Either way, we really liked each other and we couldn't label it any further than that. He was about medium height, blonde wispy hair, a fantastic smile and bright blue eyes. Which made him better was his amazing personality.
"Aye, you might want to text your mum or something, we're heading to Roslynlee tonight. We're gonna do some urbex. You'll be out pretty late, we're leaving now." Rhys spoke clearly to me, patted me on the back, and got in the car. Roslynlee was an abandoned hospital in Edinburgh that closed down in April 2010, and "urbex" is urban exploration, we seem to do that a lot. So I guess, this is where the story begins, one of many long journeys to Roslynlee!

ilynn

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I'm Lynn, I'm 15 and I'm from Scotland :) I enjoy writing and i will be writing a few different scripts for a movie me and a few others are working on :)

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Nice i like it :)

Thanks :) I'll write more of it later :)

I like :)

Thanks :)

Make sure to write the next part soon 👍

I have :D

Lol great!

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