Listen!!!!
No one hears me....
Hello?
If I hear you, you should hear me.
Shut up!!!!!!
Just for a minute stop talking please..
I'm not trying to be mean, I promise,
But it seems like you turn off your ears when it comes to me..
You're my friends, even my family
And it hurts when you walk away and cut me off.
I play it off as a joke,
Cuz it's the only way you'll listen..
You only hear my jokes
so I have to talk In jokes for you to listen.
Two.
Only two people hear what I say.
My true family,
My true friend.
Most hear only my "random" thoughts I say, but they're random on purpose.
I think about them.
About how I can make you here them
And still get my point across.
In the long run it's not good.
Because now people don't take me seriously.
I tell you to stop,
But I guess since I'm serious, you can't hear me.
I'm a lot deeper than just the few words you actually hear.
But you'll never see that unless you shut up
And finally listen.
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Plz tell me wat u think!!!!! Constructive criticism is welcome!!!!! Plz tell me wat u think it means.
@alliyah001 ya mor like practically everyone in my life!!!!!! Just my best friend Lauren and my mom.
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