How do you feel now it's done
A stunning tale
Of setting sun
Played like a fiddle
A catch me out riddle
Strumming on heartstrings
Is a wicked thing
Elaborate charade?
They'd have given their aid
Don't think of us cruel
Or emotional fools
Feelings were fired
No tricks were required
No implication
That it's not real
But playing
With how people feel
Perhaps we all should grieve
Those who seek to deceive
Maybe they should quietly leave
No they shouldn't
For there's no proof
Just write
Day or night
Please include
the
truth
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Comments & Feedback (25)
I dont understand the need for deceit in people, especially when this community is so warm and welcoming. Maybe some assume because of that that we are gullible. The balance is always restored though. Opussia heals itself.
Oh no I hope this isn't what I think it is. I did consider it the other day before my 100, but thought no one could be so cruel. ๐ณ๐๐๐
Does this mean that something that a person said was happening to them wasn't? I did have my suspicions...
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