Can't hear a sound
Oh, what's this
That I have found
Your car keys
That'll do me
And your wallet
Your money
I try each night
To get it right
Rather you didn't
Put up a fight
Just give it here
I'm on my way
But no, you chose
To die today
Can you see
Your life force flee
Your blood pooling
In front of me
I don't mind
There's nothing to find
Don't even have
An axe to grind
Just need the cash
Hence knifes flash
So unlucky
We had to clash
But that's the way
I earn my pay
Sorry it had to be
you today...
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Can you teapost one of mine too. πππ great write. Just noticed this is no 803!! One word.... Amazing. πππ
@eddie12309 thank u sweety. β€ I didn't teapost the other one, but I think I'll pop off and teapost one of yours...πβ€π
Chilling write! You've executed a mood brilliantly- a mood I wouldn't ever to want run across!πππππ
@ckahn thanks kristina, a bit bleak I thought, sadly all too true as well πβ€ thanks for reposting hun ππ
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