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Ravenswing

It was a lovely summers day
When he took his stick and walked
To the sleepy little hamlet
Of which the locals talked
He strolled and took the sights
No signage could he see
It should only be mile
How much longer could it be?

And then the sign appeared
Weather worn, an ancient thing
The legend borne upon it
Welcome to Ravenswing
It seemed to be deserted
No villagers to be found
His gnarly walking stick
Made an empty lonely sound

But he couldn't help to feeling
Many eyes upon his track
But curiosity had held him
And as he walked, the sky turned black
The greatest storm then grew
And a wailing filled the air
The souls of long dead villagers
They took him, then and there

As the storm subsided
And the sun retook its place
A weathered walking stick
Of a curse, the only trace
On a lovely summers day
When black birds take flight to sing
Be mindful on your travels
Of the ghosts of Ravenswing...

leelee101

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Comments & Feedback (20)

The flow is so beautiful in this one ❤😘👏

😱😱😱❤❤❤❤❤ 😘😘 cheese before bed lee? 😜😘

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@Irrational_Kimmi 😱😱 indeed! 👻👻👻 Thanks for reposting hunnybunch™ 👍😘

@leelee101 it sounds like a scary horror film 😱 I like it though 👏

@minxyMolly ha touché! 😂 Borrowed some of yours MM...and it did come from a dream! 👻👻👻 Thanks for the RP hun 👍❤😘

@sarahgamal thanks sweety, appreciate that. 👍 Thanks for the RP too hun. 👍❤👻👻😘

@Irrational_Kimmi ooo I forgot you don't so scary do you hun? 👻👻👻

@RichWithey thanks very much amigo, appreciate that muchly! 👻👻 Many RPB's for you sir! 👍🍻🍻🍻🍻

@leelee101 no! I used to but I had too many nightmares so I stopped watching anything scary. Especially when I have no man to protect me at night...I end up sleeping with the light on 😁

Amazing piece Hun 👏✨👏✨👏✨👏✨👏✨👏

@Irrational_Kimmi 😂 it's only a poem...it's only a poem... 👻

@misslittleDHP aw thank you Kim 👍❤👻👻👻 And thanks for the lovely RP my sweet 😘😘

Awesome love this 😍👏👏👏😘

@sjw thanks Sie lil' dream I thought I'd write out. 👻👻👻 Thanks for the RP hunny 👍❤😘

I love this one! 👏👏👏

@crowncottage aw thanks Linda, glad you enjoyed it. 👍👍 Thanks for reposting my lil' ghostly story hun 👻👻❤❤

@leelee101 Love it! A catchy little ghostly number. Don't read before bed time!!! ✨🌟✨🌟

@sleepydragon cheers Diana, bedtime's where it came from! 👍❤

@sleepydragon cheers for reposting Diana 👍❤😘

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