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See Through Heart

There's a girl in my dream
And she commands invisibility
Oh how she flaunts and teases
And taunts
As she moves through a crowd
Unseen
But with a presence felt
She lays a morselled trail
To let me know where she's been
She plays a game
But like her, it's easy to see through
She knows the power she wields
So easily, and breezily
She fires off her scent
Pheromonal tracer rounds
This game of hide and seek
All shied and sleek
Has made her darker
Has made all of her
As transparent as air
You may think she's there
But you're chasing crystal clear shadows
They're all she has
To prove an existence
Day by day, hurt grows
Invisible, maybe
But it shows
And after a lifetime
Spent hiding in plain sight
Her teasing invisibility
Great responsibility
When all that's left
Apart from the tears
Is her see through heart...

leelee101

@leelee101

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Comments & Feedback (19)

Awww loving this one Lee β€πŸ˜˜πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Wow...so well put!

@sarahgamal loving you loving it Sarah! πŸ‘β€ Thanks for repairing hunny πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜πŸ’‹

@BVHarding Thank you very much. πŸ‘

@Janflower appreciate the repost hun πŸ‘ thank you ❀

@sammielee46 appreciate the lovely RP hunny πŸ‘ thank you ❀😘

I am sooooooo loving this...superb my sweet πŸ‘β€βœ¨πŸ‘β€βœ¨πŸ‘β€βœ¨πŸ‘β€βœ¨πŸ‘

This is gorgeous πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜˜

@misslittleDHP aw thanks very much Kim, kinda came in a dream so I thought I'd write it out while still half asleep! Glad you like it my sweet. ❀❀ Thanks for reposting too. πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

@sjw thank you hunny. Appreciate that muchly. ❀ Thanks for reposting Sie πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

Awesome fellaπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ»πŸ»

@minxyMolly thanks for the lovely RP MM πŸ‘β€πŸ˜˜

@Stablish cheers fella appreciate that. πŸ‘ Here come the RP beers 🍻🍻🍻 enjoy

Love this! Really pulls you along and has a great ending line.πŸŒŸπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸŒŸ

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@RichWithey thanks amigo, appreciate that. πŸ‘ Repost beers, obviously. 🍻🍻🍻 Enjoy! πŸ‘

@ckahn thanks kristi appreciate that hun. πŸ‘ Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the RP hun ❀😘

Oh this is great. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’š

@eddie12309 thanks hun, appreciate that. ❀ Rather like this one myself πŸ‘πŸ˜˜πŸ˜˜

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