You make me laugh
You make me smile
You talk to me a little while
You really are
A loving friend
My best to you I'll always send
Some days when
I'm feeling low
There is a place where I can go
I see your face
And yet I feel
It's a crying shame it can't be real
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Comments & Feedback (22)
@leelee101 look I am not trying to be rude I am just trying to help you by saying that I think that you should try writing some shorter. Because I like you long pieces but I think you should try and be versatile. I wasn't being rude. I like what you do I just think you should try other thing too.
@mattreb10 I wouldn't dream to infer you're being rude. Thanks for the comment, but I believe a good scout through my work will demonstrate my versatility. I just roll with whatever comes to mind, and I always say, never regret what it is you write, whether it be short or long, or to your own mind, plain rubbish or nonsense! π again thanks for commenting. π
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