You called me
All night
Until it bled
Daylight
I listened once
Maybe twice
Things you said
Not nice
You stick around
Even though
You say
You'll go
I hear
Your voice
Mock me
Your choice
Is it all
Really wrong?
Gone on
Too long
You spit
Understand
Why I won't
Give my hand
So far
So near
But you're
still
here
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Comments & Feedback (12)
Can't decide if the Words portray bitterness or resignation. Maybe a tiny hint of acceptance? A good piece for sure!
@jojo72 thank u jojo. Bit of anger and annoyance thrown in for good measure too I'd say! ππβ€
Like @jojo72 says, this can be interpreted by the reader in so many different ways, which is always interesting. Love it ππ
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