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The Owl

Sounds like an excuse but its not I wrote this when I was 8 and had an obsession with owls but I have managed to change some of the dialect so it makes sense..

As the wind dances through the trees
A lonely hoot travels with the breeze
Sit a creature hidden by night
On a branch far from sight
An owl there sits small and frail
Beneath a full moons light
Forever pale.

leopardair

@leopardair

I am a 16 year old animal lover from England!! I am random sometimes and love to joke but no ones perfect so just smile :)

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Comments & Feedback (11)

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When you were 8? Seriously? 😱 This is good lol 😊

Yeah I was quite literally obsessed with owls this one was I only one I could read the hand writing of lol

I have managed to change some of the dialect so it makes more sense

@Jamtots @coolioXP thanks :)

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You were a very talented 8 year old. I loved it 💜

If you can something amazing at eight years old, I really don't know what you could do now! Great little poem. Loved it! 😃

Woop!! This is lovely. Owls 💚😜

Sweeeeeeeet xxxx

@mpallister24 thanks but I am apaolutely pants at poetry now

@misslittleDHP @naaviie @mpallister24 @redfae thank you it was a rhythm at the time but I guess it makes more sense now :)

@leopardair i am sure you are great 😃

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