Chapter 1 -
Things that go bump in the night
It was just another night on whitechapel road. Everything was ordinary. So fucking ordinary. Thats why I did it, and those bitches didn't know what was coming.
It doesn't take a genius to remove a heart. Just a heartless bastard, so, heart in hand, I removed anything else worth keeping and dumped the bitch.
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Hi, I'm Linkigi. I am 17 and taking my 2nd year of A-Levels. I don't take english but I write a lot of literature, Prose and poetry outside of school. Every single thing I upload to this app is 100% my own material.
The colours dance. They always dance for me. The canvas comes alive, as we whirl in time to the rhythm of the universe. But the colours are unkind, harsh, immortal. I need the music.
A boy walkes along the Regent street. He sees a little, little cat in a train. He can't understand what the cat are doing. So he takes the cat and walk the way home. Why not?.
The cold gradually seeps through my weakened body. It takes hold of my mind, drys me up, touches me with its clammy hand. It scratches at my throat and brings tears to my eyes.
The boy was running. He didn't know why. He didn't know where. He didn't know how long he could last. All the boy knew was that if he stopped, it would get him. The lion behind him.
Crusader kingdom of Jerusalem still in control of the Middle East; terrorist attacks daily, persecution, still, of Muslims and Jews there, expansionist into Syria, Transjordan, Iraq etc.
Part 16 She came toward me, one slow dragging step at a time. Her breaths were sharp, like she was in pain.
Part 21 I leaned down and kissed her, our lips barely touching. I could feel her take a shuddering breath. Pulling back i looked at her, her eyes still closed.
The trees collapsed onto each other- like dominoes in a formed line- on both sides of me.
The White Rabbit is a novel I started about a year ago. I gave up around half way though but this app and puffy's story has inspired me to start again. So here I am, rewriting The White Rabbit'
@linkigi great start! As always I live your use of language-'I'm just a heartless bastard, so hand on heart...' it's great😊 yeah I probably sound like a bit of a twat saying that but what can I say, I like language😊 keep writing!
@linkigi 'tis a pleasure😊 I enjoy your writing you have an excellent grasp of language and I'd love to try and learn from it😄
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