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To Die On The Ocean Bed

Even as a child I loved the deep,
I was like a water baby,
But not like that at all,
Once I was in the sea I wanted to stay there,
Beneath it's ripples forever...

Even as a teen I wanted to die drowning,
Such a perfect, simple death,
An easy way out,
To be consumed by the murky depths was all I wanted,
To feel it filling my lungs...

Even as an adult I was thought weird,
Wanting a perfect death in the ocean,
To feel I could breathe beneath the waves...

Even as an elder,
And I felt death creep closer,
I went on a vogue out to sea,
The captain wasn't looking,
As I tumbled from the edge,
We'd only just set out on our journey,
And I smiled as I tumbled and I heard his shouts,
Too late.

I'd already felt the water consume my bones...

Now drifting slowly down to the ocean bed,
This was all I ever wanted,
This tranquil death,
You may call it suicide,
But far from it it was.

Because all I ever wanted,
Was to die on the ocean bed.

lonelynutmeg98

@lonelynutmeg98

Hi, I'm Megan I'm 13 and a budding singer songwriter. Scripts, songwriting, poems and news reports are my favorite types of writing, but I love virtually anything! But on here poems are my speciality! I have a curious mind and my poems are usually deep! Thanks :D

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*inspired by Never Let Me Go by Florence and the Machine. In the booklet that comes with the CD she describes her unique, somewhat-sad childhood experience on drowning-which is what the song is based on.

I was just about to say about Florence! This is beautifully sad Meg, such lovely imagery and tone 💚💚💚

@naaviie thank you so much! I love Florence but she is rather strange brilliant music though, actually I must admit I'm quite proud of this piece too :)

You should be 😊😊

@naaviie :D also thanks for the repost :D

@naaviie yes really good. Although drowning, I couldn't think of anything worse 😔

@naaviie oops didn't mean to tag you. Fat fingers

@eddie12309 thank you! Hmmm... I don't know I do actually understand where florence is coming from though something about water calms me...

@MrsS thanks for RP!

@eddie12309 - I'm with you though, drowning seems a horrible way to go!

@naaviie I'm kinda half and half it seems calm but would it really be? horrid but brilliant (why I think this I don't know)

Apart from I'm weird :D

And not like I would drown myself

@naaviie @lonelynutmeg98 LOVE Florence's voice and music!!! @lonelynutmeg98 I'm sure you're not anything like as weird as you see yourself 😉😊 I like to think of myself as eccentric and learn to love my craziness!! 😉😚😚

@MrsS :D I like your attitude it's cool :D Florence is great x

Not sure, as much as I love the water, don't know if I could breathe it in!

Hear hear @MrsS 👏👏👏

@eddie12309 yip, I love being by and on water, so peaceful yet powerful. The sound of its movement cleanses me.. But drowning 😱 .. When the instinct for life kicks in and you fight for breath but only get another lungful of water.. Eyeballs bursting, panic.. Horrible way to go ..

@naaviie neither could I-I just like the idea of where florence is coming from her thoughts on it are strange and different and I guess that's why I like her :D

@Burrfoot yeah guess so

How about.... Scuba diving? That is much better 😜

But yeh, she is brilliantly unique and of course we love her for that!

@naaviie yay! Let's scuba dive :D

@Burrfoot you took the words out of my mouth. 👽 @naaviie eek scuba diving. Run out of air trapped below!😱

@eddie12309 lol there's def a psychic thing going on 👽 but scuba diving it amazing! Only been able to do it a couple of times cos my burst wardroom

Lol eardrums (not wardrobe) don't like it

@eddie12309 even worse than drowning in a way if that happened 😱@naaviie Opussians are planning a meet up we should all go scuba diving @eddie12309 safety instructors will be assisting so don't worry :D

@Burrfoot ouch! It kills when that happens!

@lonelynutmeg98 @eddie12309 @Burrfoot - I love diving!! Saw wild dolphins and turtles and corals etc etc last time in the red sea 😍

@naaviie aww wow! I never been diving before but I'd love to try it!

@Burrfoot @lonelynutmeg98 @naaviie i know I know all very pretty and amazing under there but me, in water oot me depth = 😱

@eddie12309 your more scared than the ladies! :D

Anyway Florence she's amazing, saw her on the introducing stage at radio 1 big weekend. 👍💚

@lonelynutmeg98 @naaviie 😂😂😂 I am a lady.

@eddie12309 cool! I love her hair ;) nice colour :D

@eddie12309 I'm so sorry! The name threw me off completely! :( what a dope :)

@eddie12309 - Eduardo strikes again! 😂😂😂

@naaviie :D@eddie12309 so sorry! Feel so bad!

@lonelynutmeg98 don't be 😃 you're not the first. It's a bit if a running joke now.

@eddie12309 yay! I am not alone :D why are you called that anyway? (you don't have to answer if it's personal by the way)

Yaaay let's all drown 👍😉👍😂😂😂. Well written and emotive.

@yowwa thanks but that's not what I want everyone to go and do ;)

@lonelynutmeg98 ha ha. I know, so does everyone. Superbly composed. 👍👍

@yowwa thank you very much yes everyone knows the plan is to scuba dive too ;)

@lonelynutmeg98 💦💦🌊🏄🏊😉

@yowwa oh surfing too? Love that idea :D

@lonelynutmeg98 lol 😂😂

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