Ok so I was giving my friend some idea for her story what do you think?
Friend: no way he's not saying that
Me: Why? It's an amazing sentence:
"JESUS CRIST YOU STINK! GO HAVE A SHOWER SMELLY I ABSOLUTELY HATE THE SMELL OF YOU!!!" said Colin calmly
"umm okay....." I said shuffling away from him
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@Burrfoot the sentence was the capital thing + said callum calmly. "um...okay." I shuffled away. The story is in first person. The 'I shuffled away.' Is part of the story
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