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By Candlelight

The candle burns,
A flickering light,
It's soft, warm glow,
Lighting up the night.
By candlelight,
I write a note,
My tears stain the paper,
Smudge the words I wrote.
It was all too much,
My dad was gone,
My mum was drinking,
My brother had run.
He left me here,
To face mum on my own,
Her screaming, her hits,
I felt so alone.
But now, I've had it,
I've got to run away,
I need to escape,
I'll find my own way.
So, I pick up my bag.
I blow out the light,
I open the door,
And run into the night.

meggie2012

@meggie2012

Slow down, you go too fast. You've got to make the moment last. I live in Scotland and I love books, writing, noodles, swimming and music. I've just turned 12 and I've suddenly realised that I've only got about 6 more years left at home. Time flies. So treasure each moment - don't let any opportunities pass you by. #projecthumanity

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So sad but do gorgeous ! Lovely write 😊😘

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I love this poem @meggie2012

Thank you all!!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒβ˜Ίβ˜Ίβ˜Ίβ˜Ί

@Diddle Special thanks to you for reposting!! πŸ˜ƒ

@meggie2012 ooooh I really REALLY like this

@ClaireTilley thanks!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

@aiyumastranger thanks for the repost! πŸ˜ƒ

This. Is. Brilliant.

@speed577 😊☺😱Thank you!!!

This is gorgeous- really effective! Xx β€πŸ’›πŸ’šπŸ’™πŸ’œπŸ’—πŸ’“πŸ’˜

@Petitpois22 THANK YOU!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

@Petitpois22 And thank you for reposting this and so many of my other opusses!!!! πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„β˜Ίβ˜Ίβ˜Ίβ˜ΊπŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜€πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

@meggie2012 You're welcome- you're work is fantastic! Xx

Awesome :o thanks for the repost by the way :)

@deviltortoise thanks! And no problem πŸ˜„

Really good poem! W

Sorry meant to put well written

@awesome_angel Thank you!! πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š

Your welcome 😊

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