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Comments & Feedback (43)
@meggie2012 idk its hard 2 juge. But some people in my school are just ... WOW! Unlike me... Quote from boy i like: 'i really like your personality its just if u were pretty i would go out with u' ...... See what i mean
@missjods yeah, there is a different kind of 'pretty' for everyone. Some people are the people that everyone thinks is beautiful. There are a lot of those people at my school. I'm not one of them, I'm kinda the nerdy kid at the back who nobody really notices. P.S. that boy isn't worth it if he based who he goes out with on looks! The inside is more important than what meets the eye.
@meggie2012 well thnx but most if the boys at school think that:( but looks arnt obviously everything cuz ur pretty but not popular and im not pretty but poular. Wired hey!
@missjods it's a shame that so many boys think that way :( they're the same at my school. Sure, I'm not super popular, but I've got a group of very close friends. I don't know what you look like, but it honestly doesn't matter. You sound like a great person if you've got so many friends!
Well i only have 14 friends but i hang around with the 'popular' group if u know wat i mean@meggie2012
@meggie2012 but the thing is im fed up with the grouping thing i dobt think people shoukd be labeled. Because say i have a friebd but shes 'unpopular' Some 'popular' people will go "eww dont be friends with her!" but i still do! Lol you see thats why grouping sux
@meggie2012 oh and im sorry for sounding quite up myself saying im 'popular' because its just a name and dosnt mean much. 😉
@missjods yeah, I don't see why we should all be put into groups. At my school, there are the 'populars', then there's the average people. Them there's slightly less popular kids. At the bottom are the really unpopular kids.
Nobody wants to sit next to the unpopular kids, or be partners with them, or sit at the same table as them or anything. There's no actual reason they're unpopular either. They're just some poor kids who get picked on all the time.
@meggie2012 exactly the same. Exsept from one person called april she stalks everyone and listens in to their convosations but the horrible thing is that she has nits!!! 😳 We have told her but she dose nothing about it!!! But i think all schools are just like what you said. Its just silly
@meggie2012 From what i know of you you seam like a really nice person so if some people at your school ignore you i dont see why?!?
@missjods well, the attention I get from my friends is nice, but the attention I get from some other people isn't as nice...I don't really want unwanted attention so I'd prefer to be ignored by them.
@aceace64 don't make me curse at you, I try to keep my profile clean but I'll use all the curse words I know,im thinking of leaving opuss already , don't push me 😡
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