Wrote a poem
It was brand new
Wrote a poem
Just for you
Filled with everything that's happened
Between me and you
All the things you've said
And all the things you do
I wrote this poem
I wrote it for you
Of your hate and love
And the things you knew
I wrote a poem
It wouldn't do
A perfectionist?
Yeah, that's you
My poem wasn't good
It had mistakes here and there
So what really happened,
Is that I left the page bare ...
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18 year old student, loving opuss and the people I've met along the way <3 ... Kik: Bethlin
Dear Opuss I have no time to stop and play, pesky deadlines - go away. I'm try my best to draft a line, It won't be great, it will be mine.
Poetry, hypnotises and spellbinds us rhyme, metre and image designed to fix the poem in our memory, to burn it deeper than prose to stay in the memory for a split second longer to use the poem as a...
I think I'm running out of words to say. I think about it every day. A poem or a story. Whatever I'll do it later don't worry. So later I turn on my Ipod and open this app.
A ny time I'm stuck, C an't think of a rhyme. R eally out of luck, O r really out of time.
Ok I wanted to write a blog but everytime I start to write one it turns into a poem. Just can't help myself.
I need a new subject to write about. Life love and fun I've totally worn out. Done a bit of erotic and a little bit of deep. And into my head you've all had a peep.
To celebrate a milestone. Seems quite the thing to do. And why not, it's rather special. To have penned a hundred or two. But then there is the difficult choice. What to write to make your mark.
I'm popping off for a little while To have a rest and revive my style, My little head is really bare Like Hubbard's cupboard there's nothing there.
@patdolan83 no they don't, luckily this isn't true 😊 but something like that has happened to me before, I wrote my mum a poem and my stepdad criticised it ... You just can't please everyone, can you? 😊 Thank you for the lovely repost Patrick 😘👍❤
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