Maybe I should explain from the beginning. I was 14 at the time and had just had my heart broken by Luis. I thought he was the guy I would spend the rest of my life with and looking back now I see that would never of happened, yes he would treat me right at first but after about a year whenever we went out he would flirt with other girls as if he was single, even though I was standing right beside him. A few months later, he didn't come to school, but I wasn't sure why. I was really worried as I thought something was wrong. As the school bell rang I gathered my things up as quickly as possible and sprinted out the school gates towards his house. His parents weren't in but the door had been left open as if someone had been too busy to close it behind them. I called Luis' name but there was no reply, so I walked upstairs and heard something coming from his room. I did knock on the door but obviously no one heard so I just walked in, after all I was worried for him. But in fact I should have been worried for myself, I knew it would happen one day but I had just tried convincing myself that it wouldn't. Luis was lying there in his bed snogging Claire's face off, that's all I saw before I collapsed to the floor in floods of tears. I never found out what else happened but I'm pretty sure that slag wanted more...
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