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Gem Of Eternity

To survive is to believe in yourself
Don't listen to the hounds of torture
They just want their greed and wealth

In a world so wild, cruel, rifts so torrid
And a time that is so faceless
We begin to realise that behind a dream we are hid

My sins are not so deadly now love is here
My perception is pure, my soul now so sweet
For I have been reborn, no more that I fear

My senses delve deep, delve so very low
You are my fantasy, my life, now true
I can reveal so much, all faces I must show

When I hold you, a warmth I feel now and beyond
A mystic wave of beauty possesses
Possesses my core and cherishing me long

You are my breath, my blood, my heart I feel beat
Like that of the Seven Wonders
Your beauty is boundless, we were destined to be

The moondays I cherish, the doves fly free
Then the unicorn kisses the sky
Then I kiss you, my gem of eternity

Β©Kim Brown 4th September 2012
First written July 1993

misslittleDHP

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Comments & Feedback (14)

Ooooo hunny that's lovely... πŸ‘β€πŸ˜

Yes that's beautiful. You must have been in a very lovely place to write this. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ’šπŸ’š

Awww thats soooo sweet β€β€πŸ‘πŸ‘

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@leelee101 @eddie12309 @sarahgamal @RichWithey ....oh the throes of a new love....remembered this well...glad you gorgeous peeps liked it...I often wonder whether it's too deep?😍😘

@irrational_kimmi @leelee101 @eddie12309 @sarahgamal @RichWithey ....a big cake to share for all those lovely reposts πŸ˜πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸŽ‚πŸ˜

@misslittleDHP deep is fine hun πŸ‘β€

@misslittleDHP good cake! πŸ‘ nom nom nom... πŸ˜‚πŸ’‹

@misslittleDHP ooh I'm going to bake a cake! That's something to pass this shit awful day away. And then I shall eat the whole cake. ☺

No not too deep at all. If that's how you felt surely that's what poetry is about ?😘

Last verse in particular is really beatific

Last verse in particular is really beautiful πŸ’šπŸ’šπŸ’š

@Irrational_Kimmi πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ....save me a piece my sweet 🍰🍰

@eddie12309 in my youngers years life was hard Hun...sometimes it never made sense to me at all hence my deep poetry...but I love reading them now as its a journey reading them back...I can see how far I've come....thanks for taking the time to read them and comment Hun 🌹🌹

@naaviie thanking you very muchly gorgeous 🌹🌹🌹🌹

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