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Inner Sadness

Restless like the petals of a flower
Like them too, I die
Sadness scorns my every being
Making life so very hard to hold

A perpetual glee, lies cold and dormant
I long so much to smile
To regain my former self
Not this joke that I've become

A wistful sound nourishes the cries
I neglect myself so
With each kiss he has given
A little more I shall die

If only I could kiss goodbye
Yet it hurts to let go
Why hold onto something vile?
He is a child not knowing what he beholds

A craving so deep inside of my being
Will ring forever true
Darkness is my whole pathetic life
Love, hope and dreams are on the other side

©Kim Brown 20th August 2012
First written August 1992

misslittleDHP

@misslittleDHP

Writing has been my friend since a teenager...I laugh, cry, think, pretend, smile as I do it. I feel that I communicate better through my writing as in person I can appear a tad scatty.

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Comments & Feedback (17)

It's a beautiful, but a sad piece. I enjoyed reading it, but I'm glad it's past tense 😉👍👏👏

Such a wonderful piece, full of emotion! :3

I'm with @Weirdwolf glad it's in the past. You had all this within you, all that time ago! Well, now's your time Kim... Lovely stuff. 👍❤😘👏

Thanks for sharing Kim💓💓😘

Wow. 💚🌹💚🌹

I'm so glad this is your past 😓 and that you found the strength to move on 💐😘❤

@Weirdwolf @leelee101 @Stablish @naaviie @sjw ....it's very surreal reading my past...I was so full of angst and confusion....makes me realise how far I've come....THANKYOU all for your comments my sweets💛💙💛💙

@Tizzy that is so kind my sweet...thankayoooo 💗💚💗💚

@gazplend @sjw @naaviie @Stablish @leelee101 ....big mwahs for all the reposts 💋💋💋💋

@Tizzy @Weirdwolf and a massive huggie for the reposts my dears💪💪💪💪💪💪💪

Yet more prove of the health benefits of writing 😌

@misslittleDHP You're welcome! Always love reading your work - whether past OR present!

@Tizzy 💜💗💚💚💗💜

Amazing! Your on fire today! 😉😘

@MrAlex awww thanks Hun....have been posting my very old writes that I found yesterday...never ever thought they would be seen in the public domain...lol....I though they would just be in a box somewhere forever....so great to post and share them!!....mwah for the RP too!

@misslittleDHP :3 😃 💙💗💜💗💜💙

@pjyenn...thankayoooo muchly for the kind repost my sweet💛💙💛

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